Which of these sentences is correct?!


Question: Which of these sentences is correct.?
If you were writing your Profile would you write:
"I'm please I discovered YA. In doing so I've met an old man who I'm deeply in love with, Dr. Doolittle."
OR :
"I'm pleased I discovered YA. In doing so I've met an old man, Dr. Doolittle, with whom I'm deeply in love".Health Question & Answer


Answers:
The second response is correct. In the first, there are incomplete words & other words are left out completely as well as phrases being in the wrong order, making the writer seem illiterate, lazy or both.Health Question & Answer

Your second answer is grammatically correct.Health Question & Answer

the second-Dr. Doolittle.?!.?!!.?!Health Question & Answer

Yes, number two is correct. Odd sentence though. :)Health Question & Answer

The second one for sure.Health Question & Answer



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