Opionons needed for my new and improved ADHD poem!?!
Question: Opionons needed for my new and improved ADHD poem!.?
please help me! i need opionons on my finalized ADHD peom. i am 13 and wrote this in overall about 30-40 minutes. is it good enough.? any suggestions.? sorry, i know its long
I see you talking,
But I can
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I see you talking,
But I can
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your poem is awesome, specially seeing as you're only 13 years old. however i have one lil grammar mistake to point out, "Being that you is known as the annoying little pest" the "is" should be "are" i think.
also, are you really ADHD because you explain it so wonderfully, my sister has ADHD and is terribly made fun of.
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also, are you really ADHD because you explain it so wonderfully, my sister has ADHD and is terribly made fun of.
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